Captured in the darkness of the night 2

wow lorna, i read this three times and still want to read it again, seriously. you capture that dreamlike state, were everything keeps changing, locations move, people out to get you etc so vividly. is this a dream you had? and the `cant see his face in the shadow` is as chilling as it is clever. a really creepy image that i can see quite clearly in my head. and again your style of poetry, your free form way of writing and the way you use it to dramatic effect when the speedometer is increasing makes me smile with admiration. again you use few words but to a harrowing effect, just like a real dream where nothing is too detailed. top marks lorna5 again. thanks for your kind words you say about my poems, your views are becoming quite valuable to me,x

This poem is special, but again great. You have so much talent. Keep writing...