Death By You

by X~Angie~X   Jun 23, 2006


I rip my skin
my hip has cuts
this is not a sin
am I in a rut?

I dont care
this isn't rare
most people cut to
thats what most do

I can not stop
cause its how I vent
I could possibly drop
and make a big dent

it might be alright
if I do die
it was too long of a fight
so if I do, don't cry

you wont be sad
for this is what you wanted
I hope you are glad
just don't flaunt it
you helped kill me

please tell me if this is a good title or not.. I dont know if it is or not.. please comment and vote.. thank you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelssღ

    I like this one too!=) Great job!! Good rythem...srry i dont know how to spell it!! haha XD Anywayy! Great jobb! Keep writing you have talentt!!=) XoX Luvv yaa! [Chelss`

  • 17 years ago

    by manic moments

    Hey Angie. Its a good title, just a lil different to what people expected. But thats a good thing. Dont stress. Do what you want and not what others want. Nuce poem tho, very straight to the point. Great rhythm. I hope you write more, its great to read your stuff.

    Thanks for commenting on some of mine. Its great to read your comment.

    Luv Niquee
    XOXOXOXO

  • 17 years ago

    by FeelingIsickIinmyhead

    I liked this poem alot! And yes it was a good title! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LaurenLiz

    Hey,
    I like this poem alot!!! It's a good title!

  • 17 years ago

    by Freakfall

    Great poem and the tittle is should stay the same great job 5/5. thanks for the commenton my poem.

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