Winter Wind

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 24, 2006


Icicles of stars,
Cold against the moon,
Swimming in the darkness,
Left to drown so soon,

Eyes look out in to the night,
Of blue, brown and green,
The moon dipped slighty black,
The slate is wiped so clean,

New beginning, old end,
Past is gone today,
Ice is spat onto the lake,
And trees stand ready to fray,

World is peeling from the heart,
In the wind from what's begun,
Direction of it's soul,
Tangled in web's been spun,

Senses aroused to the forest,
With it's frosted trees,
White spectacles of beauty,
And the eruption of the seas,

Frozen over until they're warmed,
But now it's all too late,
Glazed with eternal everythings,
Scarred with all this fate.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like the ending the most. Wording is great and you wrote this poem excellent.
    5/5 Keep up.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved the ending line. It really summer up this image quite well. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • Wow, i loved the way you worded the poem it had a nice affect!! Like TaperedDreams said you do have talent for writting Dark/Fantasy poems!!! This was a very nice poem!!! 5/5!! Never quit writting!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Another amasingly written poem! I loved it. You've certainly got talent for writting dark, fantasy poem. Great work on this!

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by ChaoticStreamOfLife

    Awesome poem man, you really have the heart and emotion for it