by Will Jun 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
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Someday when my last line is written, someday when ive drawn my last breath |
by Chicken Soup
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Nice write, write more |
by Kianna
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Very awesome lol keep up zee awesomeness |
by Austin
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Interesting poem. Loads of tiny errors, but I won't list them all. Just make sure you use apostrophes!!! lol The story was somewhat cryptic, which made this an interesting piece of work. Keep writing, well done. |
by MwithoutK
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This poem is so good... im so impressed! high five :} pm me sometime mk? keep it upp |
by Shotput Girl
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Another wonderful poem. I love the meaning behind it too. God bless you and your family. Keep up the good work. |