I Never Promised

How cruel of him >< well, try to cheer... there will be many boyfriends in your future... so is the way of .. erm 2020! Good luck

Interesting way to display your first "love" but hate can spawn from misplaced actraction... so this worked well and although it didn't reach out to me i believe many others have felt the same way

I never promised to stay away
From that other girl
You saw us together one day

^ this kind of confused me i thought you were saying this from a guys point of view before i got to the bottom i still am a bit confused on "Stay away from that other girl" since if you loved a guy i would assume you wouldn't promise to stay away from a boy but i'm sure it makes sense to you

I never promised to go
To your funeral
It was stupid to think I would show

^interesting putting a funeral scene in the poem (although i hope he isn't dead) the stanza looks like it wouldn't flow with the length of the last line but it does.

I never promised to leave
Flowers on your grave
I will not even grieve

^ another brillant ending you have a way of a making the ending obvious without a feeling that theere should be more

I read a poem with the same title I do believe. They both repeated the title in every stanza, which made it strong and weak. Strong for certain stanza, and weak for others. I guess this is kind of why this poem is getting rated low. But, I will give you a nice 5 :)

*high 5* !! woohoo!

Your poem sound so different from the others...and i love it.....
for some reason it's sad to read it.....

Well, i loved it! I guess it has a good point, i dont really know b/c i dont know your story! but i do know it was a great poem!! 5/5