My Life

by Simply Complex   Jun 30, 2006


Everyday I wake up
And I stare at the sky
Everyday I wake up
And I begin to cry

I look out the window
And see the world
I look out the window
And wonder why.

Whats out there for me
That is so great?
Whats out there for me
Thats not worth a visit to the pearly gates?

I walk around smiling
No one knows my true pain
I walk around smiling
No one knows its a game

One day Ill wake up
And stare at the sky
One day Ill wake up
And begin to cry

Ill look out the window
And see the world
Ill look out the window
And wonder why

Ill wonder why Ive watched the sky
Ill wonder why all I did was cry
Ill wonder why no one saw my pain
Ill wonder why no knew it was a game

No answers will come
They never have never will
The guns all loaded
So finally im done

Bye:Melly

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  • 17 years ago

    by anthony

    I din't know waht my body was doin wile i was readin ur poem... so if u do edit it and "improve" it then my bodies in 4 a surprize

  • 17 years ago

    by rhiannon

    U use word and make them so powerful great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wonderfully Written,
    Great Work
    Nice Rhyme
    awesome job
    5/5

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cody B

    I liked this poem..
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  • 17 years ago

    by Olliver Kahle

    I know exactly what that feels like...

    Good work, I loved it!

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