Once I was a sailor sitting on a toilet bowl

by Fredaeya   Jul 2, 2006


Thanx serena for the title!

Remember as you fly on by

that as you are, so once was i,

and yet i lie here, shattered and broken,

screaming out, my words unspoken,

suffering from tear stained eyes,

crimson rivers, obscure lies

\"made in china\" plastic wings

broken, burnt, of all the things,

bleeding mascara down my cheeks

haven\'t seen day in weeks and weeks,

defening music to drown out screams,

walking a road of lost hopes and dreams,

fingers lodged inside my throat,

as i stare unwittingly at my suicide note,

I\'m not perfect, and yeah, I care,

when your expectations are always there,

and yet i lie here, tormented and broken,

trying to scream words, never ment to be spoken,

and yet your where i once used to be,

doomed from the start on a road to misery,

so just remember as you fly on by,

that as you are, so once was I.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shery

    Hey freddie!! still totally love this poem!!! Great structure...excellent rhythm..great content...and my favorite poem in your collection! Go italy!! looks like they have some great schools over there!!! keep it up freddie..you are gonna be a star!!!!
    Love ya shery

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    Hey thanks for the comment on my poem! ur poems are all really good, and u shudnt stop writing :) jess xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by î щ۸∩ד דO β€ דђ۸ ד ĢîГ£

    Wow your poem was really good, youre an awesome writer, and I can really relate.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nate

    Good poem Freddie! Very sad poem but it is good. It really conveys the feelings of the poet. Keep up the good work with your poems. Thanks for your comment on Smoking and the Big C.
    Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Omg wow this is such a good poem!
    your an amazing writer!
    keep up this great work =]
    5/5
    stay strong
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxxxx

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