Feeling has gone

by perfectlyBROKEN   Jul 4, 2006


The walls are closing in
I feel like theres no escape
I feel the cold rushing through me
i just see a dot of your face

i can hear the high squeels of your laugh
no care, no kindness in the voice
you stand watching me falling
i cant feel your warmth around me

i can feel the dark screaming towards me
as you stay standing there, laughing
i can feel my body shaking and trembling

my eyelids start closing
as a shadow of you is what i can see
i\'m slowly going, going, gone
the feeling has gone

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brokenxx [aka Alex]

    Love the flow. keep up the great work. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by lydia

    Hey its me lydia! awesome poem i really liked it ,it reminds me of alot of things thx 4 sharing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I like it, I know the feeling, it flowed really well and everything seemed to fit perfectly. Awesome writing!

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