Maybe its you

by Sweet lig   Jul 4, 2006



I love you, And i don't pretend
I care for you, Till the very end
Your my treasure, In my life
Being my love, is such a great

You complete my day
When i see your smile
I like the way you laugh
Even the way you talk

I really adore your sincerity
And i admire your simple ways
I will do my best
To make you happy

To loving me, you don't regret
Promise that i will be yours
Till the end
I think you are the one
Ive been searching for

And maybe its you
Ive been looking for
My true love
Till the end of time

maybe its you!

i want to dedicate this poem to my darling this is for you! always take care of your self, i promise i will be true to u till the end..iloveyou so much..!

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a really good poem. The first stanza might need a little work on it, overall it's really good. Great job! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    You have the parental for grate talent as a poet I did not see this in the first couple of poems I read from you however I have seen it in the last few just do some work on your grammar and you could become very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The rhyming pattern was wierd
    the structure and flow was of
    but the message was strong

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    WoW ur poem was very nice n good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Ehh i dont really like this poem. it didnt flow too well and it confused me. not your best work.

    and this line doesnt make sense..
    Being my love, is such a great

    i know you can do better. i see this is an old poem and you have gotten better=]

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