Ice of Eternity

by JL   Jul 5, 2006


In a crystal cavern
Icicles hang down
Reflecting rainbows
On to her frozen crown

Freezing winds blow
Across the icy floor
Whipping snowflakes
Through an ice-covered door

Standing tall and proud
Legendary figure in tales
Beauty captured forever
In a frozen veil

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  • 17 years ago

    by JL

    Thank you Laura, it should be "an". I'm glad you both enjoyed it =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    I love the originality of this chosen topic. Very creative.
    The imagery created in my mind was of an ice queen!!
    What a myhtical figure.

    only one thing i noticed is that you may wanna change 'a' to 'an' for this line:
    Through a ice-covered door

    5/5!!! Awesome Write!

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