Comments : Because He Kissed Another Girl

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, it is a great poem and sad, but you wrote it so beautifuly and word them nice. I really enjoed reading each line of it.great job

  • This is a beautifully written poem..i love really like it a lot.

    xoxo sarah

  • 13 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Aww hunni this is so sad and a true story for some people out there...I just hope this isn't about you sweety, you don't deserve to be in pain...Loved it, just like all of your poems...

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 13 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I've said it before I love ur poems! They always flow so nicely, and have wonderful rhythm! And their emotion is always so strong, and this one is no different. Its beautiful! In such a dark sense. I just love how you showed how he mad eher feel so safe... and then of course, hurt her once more, it just was so strong. I applaud u=) Very Well done! 5/5

    ~+Megan+~

  • 13 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Very abrupt ending. I think you could have added one more stanza in there about why - scared of the scars, why? Why did he cheat? Just a thought. I like it though, some of the rhymes seem a bit forced but it's not bad at all, just a little awkward at times.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    This poem was amazing, im really sorry though,

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 13 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    O' man this was so gooood! I loved it(I don't say I love something very much) It was really good! Whoever gave you just a four on this was totally nuts.

    Please r/r/c rose colored glasses and let go!
    -thanks-

  • 13 years ago

    by Moose

    Amazing poem, really was, sorry if this happened, really am. Its amazing how you kept a ABAB scheme the whole time, takes a lot of skill and you did it flawlessly. Storyline was great, and i couldnt help but give you 5/5

    ~Bryce~

  • 13 years ago

    by just a little girl

    Aww this poem made me cry, i gave you 5 because the way the words had come together was beautiful, keep writing beautiful poems xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Darkened Rose

    Wow great job!! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good. Im sorry for what happened to you with this guy.

  • I really really enjoyed this poem its so sad.. but so sorry if its true it was writed so beautifully

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent poem! Very emotional and well written. Keep up the good work. xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Same Year Reply

    Thats really sad, but i like it, its really nicly composed.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cassie

    AWW omg thats SOOOO GOODD!!!! WOW I LOVED IT .. thats soo sad.. !!! omg it prolly one of the best poems ive read!!

  • 13 years ago

    by the middle

    This is such a beautiful, bittersweet poem. I enjoyed reading every line, but i feel so sad for you. I'm so sorry that you had to go through/ are going through this...
    amazing poem! take care,
    xoxoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Kyra

    This is such a heartfilled poem I think you have done a great job keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that's so sad. I can relate to it, without the self harm and the suicide (of course) but you did a great job on this. It flowed and rhymed well. I loved it. 5/5 Take care.. I hope everything works out for you!

  • 13 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Wow hun amazing...

    ive been in this situation before and i kno how it feels....

    trust me hun hes not worth it.....

    and im here for u if u have tot talk...

    lover the poem

    xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Wow- I love this poem but my favorite part is the very last stanza. I'm really sorry guys are such jerks but hopefully everything will get better. Good things come from bad things.

    Rach ♥