Walking Away

by Liquid Dreams   Jul 7, 2006


I remember when you said
"I'll always be there"
But sometimes it feels like
You don't really care

I say that I'm fine
But it's not really true
The thing that hurts me
Has always been you

You've left me before
But I always forgive
But pain and sorrow
Is no way to live

I am tired of you
Doing this to me
Let my heart go
So I can be free

Don't come near me
For it only hurts more
Just keep walking away
As you have before

[Written for a contest... This was another one done last minute, so I know that it's not the best. It's basically me venting about two different situations combined. Please read, rate, and comment, and I'll do the same for you! Thanks!]

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Omg!! I can relate to this so much! This was a really good poem. It flowed and rhymed very well! I love your poems. I think i'm going to add you to my favorites. Anyways, Great job!!

    Cayce x

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Actually this is really good :)

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    I related to most of it 5'5 i liked it alot. Would love u to comment on any of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by dee

    Damn... thats exactly how i feel at the moment. what are the odds... hmm weird. i loved it great flow.
    dee