My Uncle's Addiction

by Arcane Blondie   Jul 9, 2006


You dont even know how much I love you,
Its more immense than anyone could ever know,
I want so badly to help you,
But its a job that you have to do on your own,

I know that its an addiction,
That is hard to overcome,
But it means a ton to me that you quit,
I worry about you all the time,

Do it for your son who means so much,
For your daughter, so when you two meet she will be proud,
Do it to show people alcohol cant ruin your life,
Prove to them you are willing to work hard,

Dont drink and drive again,
Its risking so many peoples lives,
Its the reason the person you love wont get married,
Think about what you are doing to others,

You get so violent when you drink,
You become a different person,
How is this good for your son?
You cant control the actions you make,

I know I dont mean that much to you,
But to me you are my favorite uncle,
I love you with all my heart,
Please just save yourself.

*My uncle is an alcoholic and I worry about him so much. It makes me cry when I think of his life. He has two children and he has only seen his daughter once (when she was born) because his ex-girlfriend wont let him see her. I really wish that he could overcome his addiction, but I can only imagine how hard it is. Whenever he gets put into a hospital for his problem he always leaves though and I really wish he would just let them help! I love and care about him so much and it really pains me that I cant help him-but he needs to quit for himself*

Sorry this poem isnt my best, but was really hard for me to write a poem about a topic that gets me so upset.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    My uncle was an alcoholic too... I wasn't around when that happened b/c he turned his life around b4 i was born... but I'm sure if your uncle wants to bad enough to straighten out his life, he will... it just may take some time... good luck to him I know it will be hard.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. that poem made me cry. It sounds like you care alot for him, and it really shows that you love him in this poem. It's filled with so much emotion and very heartfelt. Great job on this. The last stanza is what really got me and made me cry... I just love the way that you ended it. Great job on this. 5/5 I hope you unlce will be able to quit drinking and make his life better :)

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    As you said it is not your best, but I think that there is a lot of emotion and heart put into it!!! It really does have great potential, I think the flow on this one was just a little ify and I think it also could have went on longer.....

    I think your other work is magnificant though............-ann

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Great poem, I'm sorry to hear about your uncle and i hope he has the strength and will to quit. I don't know what its like having someone you care about struggle with an addiction, but i know it must be hard. Stay strong for him.

    Love you lots
    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awwww... That made me want to cry. I can tell you care a lot about you uncle and want to help him. You did a good job on the poem. I don't have any alcoholics in my family so I don't know how you feel, but I hope everything gets better for you! =]

    Cayce x