The Passion of Love

by Jstuckie   Jul 10, 2006


The passion of sweet love

Iz as beautiful as seeing a white dove.

Dont give love to much of a shove.

Take it one day at a tyme.

And im sure it will work out just fyne

If u have a promblem jus read between the lines

That might happen tyme to tyme

But thats ok

The passion of love is so sweet

Its as soft as Baby feet

The passion of love is a secret none of us can keep

Its okay to weep

The passion of love isnt always so sweet

The passion of love can make u mad glad or sad

But thats ok

The passion of love is like a chart

More lyke your heart

It beats slow it beats fast!

The passion of love can be as hard as a Gem Stone

As cold as an Ice-Cream cone

But as nice as the sunset.....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    You ask for honesty, so here goes, i found the rhyming to be rather forced at places and do not like the alternative spelling. But i thought the sentiment of your poem was super sweet. I hope the critique is taken in a possitive light. Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Good ryhmeing word i cant spell very well haha lol anyways good work * comment back hehe * lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "The passion of love can be as hard as a Gem Stone
    As cold as an Ice-Cream cone
    But as nice as the sunset....."

    Hehe, thats my nickname, Gemstone. I liked this because it was so damn cute! lol
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    I think this is your best one ...

    "The passion of love is a secret none of us can keep"

    This is the best line ... good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by natalie

    Hey great poem, i would say it sums love up pretty good like x x

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