When you Left

by Jstuckie   Jul 7, 2006


Your love meant so much to me

But ovbisouly you didnt see

you took part of my heart when you left me

you didn't see Wat we cud have been

i hid my feelings 4 u in a shell

Now that u left me it seems lyke hell

But, now i cracked open like an eggshell

I'm crazy over you

Thiz cant be through

you meant to much to me

cant you see

i thought we wud stick toghter 4 ever lyke gel

Now my heart is shattered

You fcking Bastard!

I cant move forward

i wonder did you ever love me

listen closely

When you hugged me i felt like a bowl of warm chili

But now i feel so cold

I feel Ice-cold

I cant see the future for me

I feel cheap

It seem like you used me!!!

Im going 2 move forward

It feels akward

I aint gunna go backward no more

like before...

Therefore im over you!!

It feels so tru

so real

im going to be more careful....

About love

im flying away from u like a white dove

i will always love you

But im over you!!!

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Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Changed emotion quite alot. lol but i liked it
    it was good =]
    i know how you feel
    (Y)
    good job keep writing =]

    xo.louii

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie smiles

    I liked it-it seems like a very honest poem!! keep writing. xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by emptysole

    You need to remember to capitalize your I's keep up the work

  • 16 years ago

    by Insanity

    HUmm, I love the poem nice work, however I thinck that if you would use proper grammer and wording it would leave a great impretion

  • 16 years ago

    by Brooke

    That was a really really really good poem fer real

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