Dark Blue

by Lost & Delirious   Jul 11, 2006


Last night I knew you were watching over me,
Reaching my tainted soul with your peaceful eyes.
I was ashamed, but you weren't judging me,
You kissed my thoughts as I stared at the night skies.

I asked: "What color do you see within this heart?",
I guess it's not bright, since it's sorrow what I feel.
Maybe a combination of tears streaming in the dark,
A dark blue soul is what your eyes may see.

I know you understand my reasons and my pain,
You've seen my mistakes and still hold my hand.
Please help me, I don't want life to be this way,
Oh God, give me strength, you know alone I can't stand.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem is so beautifully written! Every stanza has great flow and wording, ant the whole piece is flawless. I admire your writing skills!
    5/5 from me.
    The firs stanza is my favorite.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this one is another one of your great poems!

    'I asked: "What color do you see within this heart?", I guess it's not bright, since it's sorrow what I feel. Maybe a combination of tears streaming in the dark, a dark blue soul is what your eyes may see.'

    I loved that paragraph or stanza....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wonderful. I like it, very creative, and the word strutore was amazing, can't help but want to read it again and again.

  • 17 years ago

    by skyla

    This is a really good poem..i like how u used ur words. they explain everything excellent job i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. keep your chin up hun.. this was so sadd.. the emotion was clear and strong.. it flowed pretty well and i like the idea of colour representing your mood..

    I guess it's not bright, since it's sorrow what I feel.
    ^ should be "that" not "what"

    nice job! 5/5

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