Gates

by Michael   Jul 12, 2006


The darkness surrounds me
The air is heavy
The moon above casting it's omnious Glow
These hills I stuggle up
I charge on as I try to reach the Cemetary gates
Determination defeats fatigue
My legs beneath feel as though they're Going to give way
Lightning brightens the sky around me
Thunder roars
The road gets harder
I will reach the gates
Moving up the gates can be seen
The long metal bars, black yet giving off A light of their own
Spear tips crown the gates
Climbing the hill of oblivion
I make my way to claim my prize
The gates screech open
I walk through

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Leaves off with a question. Like that. So some great visual descriptions. Iffy flow in some places. Liked how this left off with a question and had this raw sense about it.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Nice job 5/5

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 17 years ago

    by iMfAlInGaPaRt

    I give it a 6/5...lol...but I liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by samantha

    That is a damn good poem very visual and i can see every thing u explain really awsome 5/5
    vsams