Wow, that is extremely powerful! The entire poem I was reminded of the song *What Hurts The Most* by Rascal Flatts, The video anyways... I just pictured the image of a girl running as fast as she can, it looks like she is running towards something, but truly she is trying to escape! And u delivered that image so well, I loved it! Beautiful imagery and just a lovely flow with words! I’m very impressed, congrats=D 5/5! Keep up the good work.

~+Megan+~

Very interesting style of writing. I'm glad you said it was "ironic" when it started to rain, not that it just started to rain because that got rid of the cliché. I like the idea of trying to run from heart ache but i felt the idea of him suiciding seems a little overdone in many peoples poems, but i do like this it was nicely put together so keep it up.

But if this poem is true i am VERY VERY sorry for your loss...

Wow, that was a very unique style. I really enjoyed that one. The rhymes were great! and I didn't even noticed it until a few lines into the poem!

Such a tragic story, it must have been hard. Keep your chin up though.

This is really sad because do you know how many this is true for? Man thats what makes me so mad about the world there are so many taking their lives which puts the people who love them in depression..I liked your style of writing! My fave part was what the person in front of me said as well! Nice write!

Wow---thats a really sad poem-well written. I'm sorry for your loss-It must be really hard dealing with that...The poem's flow is flawless and it is beautifully written. Amazing piece! 5/5 Stay Strong---

Wow that's just really sad and horrible at the same time... i can't even imagine how i would feel if that happened to me... amazing job conveying the emotions... 5/5

Very sorry to hear about your loss, it must be very hard.
I thought the poem gave out your emotions well, it was very sad and strong. you have talent so keep writing
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"Her tears now pouring
because she can't help
blaming herself for his demise.

So she prays to God
to help her understand
why he took his life that night."

I loved those stanzas. this was just an amasingly written poem, great work. I'm so sorry to hear about your friend, that must have been a horrible thing to go through, i can tell you were really hurt. The way you described your pain was amasing.

Great write.

--Steph

I've Lost Alot Of People I Cared About Recently And Over The Last 5 Years, And I Must Say, I Know How Traumatizing It Is And I Loved This Part "She tries to concentrate
on the world passing by
she feels so out of place.

She knows sooner or later
she'll have to give up
she cannot win this race.

The heartbreak will find her
no matter how far
she can't outrun the pain."
I Enjoy Reading Your Poetry And I Mean That Sincerly Because Your Really Good At What You Do...5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow!! I loved this one! It was really unique! I loved the rhyming. The flow was amazing. It also had a lot of emotion in it, which makes the readers want to keep reading. The descriptions were also great. You did a wonderful job! Keep writting!

Cayce x

Bunk was my friends nickname. That's what we all called him. His real name was Preston.

Oh this is so touching and teary!
very sad poem, so heartfelt and sweet

I'm so sorry for what had happened to your friend!
Keep it up
Love
NemO xxxxxxx

That was so beautifuly written and i can relate;)
5stars

I have sufferd the same pain my best freind slit her throat on october 14

Wow that was a very touching poem great job writing it it was beautiful..check out some of mine

Beautiful, Beautiful poem

I had a friend kill himself too. Actually he was more than a friend because he was my reason for living.

Wow. That poem really struck me. It is beautifully written, and the rhyming and flow are perfect. The first I've read, and am looking forwards to the rest now!

Peace. [Sole]