The Last Diary Entry:

by LockedInEternity   Jul 14, 2006


** Before you read this, just know that this is not supposed to rhyme..it's just supposed to be like a cut from this girls diary. And if you don't like it, please tell me what about it you don't like, cause i was just trying out different things and i wanted to see if this would work.Thankyou

Dear Diary,
What's happening to me? Nothing's like it was before. It's like I'm standing under this HUGE storm cloud that won't disappear. What have I done to deserve this? What horrible sin did I commit? My soul is shattering as I write. The paper's so wet from the tears that escape my bloodshot eyes. Why is it that my heart wanders back into "COMPLETELY OBSESSED" and my soul rewinds into "COMPLETELY DEPRESSED"? Why is it that none of my questions get answered no matter how many times I ask, Yet, I still long for the answers more than before.
I'm so lost. Please God, I beg you, come find me. Rescue me from this forsaken ground to which I'm desperatly bound. Unleash me from this pull of gravity & take me to a place where I can spread my broken wings and still fly, a place where nor heart nor soul can overcome me. Where I can be me, and not be judged.
How fast time runs out, the mere thought of it gives me chills. How fast our life goes by...one minute you're breathing...and the next you're taking your last breath. Bye Diary, My last breath is upon me, I'm finally free to spead those wings && fly...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    This one very nice, I feel the emotios youve put into words..
    very good indeed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wow this is amazing!
    cant belive that it is not rated a 5/5

    you did a good job excellent..

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    [Bye Diary, My last breath is upon me, I'm finally free to spead those wings && fly...]

    Ooo! I liked that part! ^_^ Lol. It was the part that mostly popped out to me. I thought it was excellent, although it's a diary entry. I liked how you thought of the idea of spreading your wings to fly. Great touch. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow...Another sad poem. Heh. I liked it though. I liked your idea and creativity you used for it. Didn't mind being diffrent. Lovely job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... that is extremely sad but so very well written. I love the lines:
    I'm so lost. Please God, I beg you, come find me. Rescue me from this forsaken ground to which I'm desperatly bound.
    Those really stood out to me. But I think you did a great job on this. Very creative idea. I loved it! 5/5