by Marshal Jul 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Torn between emotions as life passes by, |
by Marshal
Hey Guys i was just hoping for some feedback, critisism, just whatever you think about iy |
by Sammib
Very deep Marshal, your reader can see that you had to dig deep for that and that your emotions come out, but the feeling of it is cold, kind of how you are feeling. Really good write!! |
by Nicole
Wonderful poem. straight to the point. 5/5. u should write more poems. i like ur style on this poem =) |
by Poppy
Nice |
by Poppy
Nice |