Killed By Your Whispers

by Suri dawn   Jul 18, 2006


In this book, called my journal,
I once had on each page,
phrases and swirls of joy,
and writings of happy days.

But now the black ink runs,
with the tears I have cried.
It's because of your whispers,
and all of your lies.

The ink slowly runs,
down each sad, dark page.
It now mixes with crimson.
I cut for each mistake made.

For years my poor journal,
had to also endure my own pain.
It heard of all my hurts.
It felt each time I cut again.

For so long I have wrote,
about each day that I've cried.
But now because of your whispers,
I am no longer alive...

I once wrote with black.
Now it all has turned red.
I have now written the last page.
Wrote with only two words, "I'm dead".

My last page was written in blood,
from the delicate heart you broke.
You had shown me no mercy,
with the many whispers you spoke.

My book is finally finished.
You'll now find me lying cold.
"Killed By Your Whispers" I've called it.
My suicide note told...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bitt3rSw33t

    Wow...great poem...so deep and I really "felt" your poem...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lion

    I like how the title comes back to be used to close the poem, gives it a sense of continuity some how.

    Thanks for putting it up here.

  • Yeah ....ummm this is a fantastic poem and yes depressing but great lol i mean i love it i look forward to reading more of them....