I must leave you

by Ike Dizzle   Jul 19, 2006


I love you
But we have to go our separate ways
Ever since I got caught with
You on that special day

We were in the back seat
Having a ball
Little did I know?
My mom was about to call

She asks were I was
I told her I didnt know
She was staring at me
Through the living room window

She walks out the door
With her body all mad
When I was caught
My whole body was sad

So thats why I cant see you
At least thats what I think
You were the best
Beer that I will ever drink

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I must admit that I didn't like this piece as a whole, but the last two lines saved it. I think you could've done more with this piece, but I did love the ending, it was a total surprise, believe me.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    R.O.L.F!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    NICE WORK!

    10/10

    MAN UR AWSOME ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Ahh. when i went to comment i saw that my friend raychel had made a comment.

    small world.
    ha.

    this was quite a poem. setting them up for the fall. ahh, but isnt that what comedy is about?

    love ya lots,
    ~sore

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Very creative good job...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Damn u, u fool me haha.. I am like ooh no, here anotha sad poem.. All suddenly, u are so smart and getting eveyone so lost.. This is hella funny and u are so creative!!!

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