Meant To Be

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 21, 2006


We are surely,
Meant to be,
You're my everything,
The air I breathe.
You're so perfect,
My angel of light,
So wonderful,
My perfect delight.
I close my eyes,
And think of you,
And wonder perhaps,
It's too good to be true.
I look in your eyes,
And see them glisten,
I see your smile,
And closely listen.
"I Love you darling.'
"I Love you too."
"I Love you baby,
And this is true."

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's so cute! lol. I love it! If only it were true with me >.< Great write. Short, but to the point. Terrific job =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Very sweet. :) I really don't have much comment to it. There's nothing wrong with it, it's just simple, to the point, and very cute. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Awww---This is so sweet. I love the flow, how the lines are short and the rhyme fits the poem really well--Great write! I really enjoyed reading it--5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Great poem.. 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Finally... Not ANOTHER love poem that's all 'I love him' and 'he loves me' and everything else is 'perfect'. This is real and original.

    Nice format, flow, imagery, word use and overall good piece.

    As always~ Kate

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