You

by xxmichaelxx   Jul 24, 2006


You promised you'll be there
now i look and find you everywhere
you said you'll always be by my side
now look at me trying to commit suicide
you said you'll never make me cry
now look at me asking you "then how come i can feel these tears trying to be free from my eye?"
you said your feelings for me will last and I'll always be your sweetie
now look at me I'm all history

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    That was beautiful, it was nicley written and it had a good flow!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    This is a very sad but pretty poem. I have a feeling I'll end up like that, too. The relationship I am in right now is just so confusing. Anywayz great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Awwww that was so sad but still beautiful..I don't see how it is rated only a 2 it needs a way higher score. Great job on this one and thank you for the comment.
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwwwwww.......thts sad........but ur good though!!!better than me i bet!!

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