Unknown to Dante

by Dana   Jul 24, 2006


Ice sculptures,
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Bathing our world,
creeping up our ankles.
Are we cleansed?

Hot fronts,
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L
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mixing with the risen cold,
tearing our paths to the future.
Are we relieved?

Acid drops,
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L
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G
we try to catch them, without knowing,
on our tongues.
Are we high?

Smoke rings
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G
around our heads,
our own little game.
Are we alive?

Angels of our minds
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kissing the earth,
a celestial misfortune.
Are we safe?

** Criticism welcome with open arms..please!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is one of the most unique poems i have read. i loved it. it was amazing. the way you incorporated falling into the poem was superb.

    the line about acid made me chuckle a little. and the humor was needed i feel. wonderful job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Your poems are very lovely. another 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    I liked this, it was good, but didn;t fully get the words down the side (i'm just stupid ignore me) but i liked it lots anyway!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww i loved this peom, it was fun to read, and very unique with the words spelling down, very imagernative! keep it up, please read and comment on some of my poems, Kirsty palmer xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It was kind of a fun way to read a poem...
    I could not find any spelling errors.
    I liked that it had a sort of puzzle inside of it, the words hold more than you can actually grasp at first. You have to pay acute attention to make sure that you don't miss anything.
    That is good.

    //T.L.//

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