by Suchapoetictradgedy Jul 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
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Diamonds and Pearls! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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Ooo i love lovelove the repetiveness part. those stanzas are like awesome! |
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I love the way your poem is written, and the message is described. The first stanza was my favorite one, it's a good beggining for your poem. I also liked your word choice, it was very appropiate and poetic. |