by olivia Jul 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Neva say die is wt u use to say |
by Moose
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The poem is a great poem. The only thing is that when you use words like "wen" in place of "when" or "u and wt" instead of "you and what" kind of makes the poem a little less appealing to the writer. So maybe just a little bit more editing? |
by olivia
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13 and thanks |
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This is sad (of course). How old weew you when he passed? |