by Sophie Jul 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
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First glance |
by Jessica
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Aww, that was cute and sad at the same time.. The flow was good, the descriptions you used were short but described it well, and the emotion was clear..Nice job hunny! 5/5 |
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Awwah this is at first realy sweet and lovely, and then you added a great twist (that was really well done lol) and turned it into sadness and hate... very good, great write! kirsty xx |