Too Good Is True {Ottava Rima}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 30, 2006


I gazed into your gorgeous touching eyes,
And I realized from the very first day,
That too good is true couldn't be a lie.
You told me you'd give me a sunshine ray,
Sparkling and gleaming you certainly tried,
And told you instead you could have me your way.
So gently took my hand a pull me close,
Kiss me on the lips and say you love me most.

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A Ottava Rima is a poem written in 8-line octives. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in
the following rhyme:

one octive poem. abababcc
two octive poem. abababcc, dededeff
three octive poem. abababcc, dededeff, ghghghii

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  • 17 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Wow... i love your work

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Now that was a beautiful unique love poem!! i love the line "That too good is true couldn't be a lie." cause i hate it when ppl say things are too good to be true. u stayed at ten syllables for the whole poem except for two lines. the 6th and the last. was there reason for this?

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh sucha sweet poem. I liked this one. I don't know what to say. I think the flow was well done, and it was well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    I liked you other Ottava Rima better, but this one was not too far behind. I realized that i already did "I Am" so i decided to do this one=D Short and sweet!! && very cute:):)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is really sweet. i really like this poem a lot. its very good. keep writing 5/5

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