by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS Jul 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Forgive my smile, |
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Wow very deep and sad yet good lol great piece |
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Profound............... |
by Katie
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That was an amazing poem girl, keep it up, you'll be a very good poet someday, you love to write and you get your message across to the reader, keep it up and never stop doing what you love |
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I really hvnt read anything like this before and i must say that this is really written very beautifully, every stanza holds a lot of depth in it |
by Jessica
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Awwww.. that was so sad.. the descriptions were good, the flow worked well, and the emotion was clear.. i loved it, nice job! 5/5 |