While your sleeping i'll be here peeping

by xxmichaelxx   Jul 31, 2006


She hides quickly whenever she hears a sound
but nowhere, to be found
no one was around

she goes back to sleep
real deep
no sound even a peep

she slept with her dreams
in the dream she walks along by these streams
and hear herself scream

she wakes up bleeding
her murderer grinning

felt herself without no clothes
her feet tied onto her bed
as the night led

he (beep)ed her
while she dies
with tears on her eyes

then he left

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow he....and....wow......thts a really sad and perverted death 2......well its good keep on writing

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Geeze your poetry is getting a little darker but I like it. This was really good. It was well written, had a good flow, a great choice of words, and it had a unique rhyme scheme.
    I really loved it, Great job (^_^)
    5/5
    Breanna