Lol that last line
awesome

That was good lol
will you look at my poetry please id like as much feedback as poss thnx xxx alex xxx :):)

Great one Jeannie! it takes a lot of skill to write humour and I must say, dear girl that you've really excelled in that.

thanks so much for all the lovely comments you leave on my work. It seems like i've been in hibernation for a while. feels good to be writing and reading talents like you once again.

love and peace
shobhana

That is funny

I am waiting for the day when my child asks such questions, then I can tell him/her to ask someone else..lol a great write, made my day. Timothy r

I don't have kids.. so I don't understand the humor in it :( sorry

It reminds me of my six year old sister Lizzie.

I like this and can totally relate-though my daughter is grown now, I remember her asking'Why is the sky blue?', 'Where does God live??'"Is there a Bigfoot?' and on and on.You've captured this very well and it brings back memories both frustrating and funny as I tried to answer the questions of a child.Very well expressed.

OMG! I loved it! You certainly made me smile, thanks! It was a great funny poem and although I havent read many poetry of this style yet, I can say this was one of the best so far! I totally understand you, because having a younger sister also has its funny little drawbacks. But its just natural they want to know, they need to know! I love the way kids may make you laugh at the most unexpected moments! BTW, this poem was amazing, the rhyming worked perfectly and I specially liked this stanza:

"So many questions, I have to answer
And I'm really not having much fun
Sometimes I have to ask myself
Am I sure that he is my son."
I loved it! Keep writing!

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Wow superb

This poem is very amusin but not funny, u should put it in the "life" section under family...keep up the good wrk, i liked how it flowed

Ha! thats funny i feel bad for ya
lol 5/5