Cant be wrong

by Rach   Aug 1, 2006


I know i haven't
known you for long
but I'm sure my feelings
cant be wrong

people keep telling us
we will never last
but we ignore it
and let is pass

i love you so much
and never want to part
but if we do
just look at your heart

ill be there
because i love and care
i cant wait to feel the many
hugs and kisses we will share

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  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    I love your poem it really means a lot well i can relate to it 5/5 Steve

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    Wow, I read all your poems, this one is my favorite because I can really relate, but they are all good. I noticed your last poem was a suicide poem and it really struck me deep because today I almost lost someone really close to me to suicide and I hope you don't go the same way. you are really good at writing poems and it sounds like your life is going ok, but im not really one to say... I hope you aren't dead, im really worried . If your alive and reading this could you email me or something. Thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I lied this poem i could can realte to it which makes it better to read for me anyway :):):)

    please could you comment on my poems i like to know what people think of my writing thnx xxx alex xxx

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