Giving up the fight

by Bradley Peter   Aug 1, 2006


I'll say it one last time
before i leave for good
i loved you more than life
but you never understood

all those lonely nights
when i waited up for you
while you were having fun
doing all that you could do

put you ahead of me
put my whole life on hold
but you didn't even care
left me standing in the cold

you showed me true love
then you tore it all apart
you showed me just how
to break a loving heart

you could have had it all
but you threw it all away
washed your hands of me
and expected me to stay

but it can't be like that
i have to leave tonight
so I'm saying my goodbye
and I'm giving up the fight

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  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Wow! what an excellent poem, everything about it was absoloutely brilliant 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelc

    Oh my god this is probably my favorite poem ever

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    I've already told you that I rly lyk dis poem even tho it is rly sad, cos most ppl can rel8 2 havin sum1 hurt you whom you love. In response 2 ur comment I no U comment on my work, ur da only 1 dat dus!!!
    Lots and Lots and Lots of Love,

    Ur biggest fan!!(lol)

    Love you xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    ;(

    So sad
    makes me wanna cry
    another awesome piece
    5/5
    thanks for the comment and I'd never forget such an awesome poet.
    ~EMah

  • 17 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    This is a really good poem! i can relate to it... deffinately 5/5
    Its not good when you love someone so much and they dont even care....and its also hard to let go....like i said i can relate to it...im actually going through something very similar to what i just read...And its not a very good feeling....
    Great Work keep it ^
    Please read and coment on some of my poems! id really apprciate it and would love to hear what you think...
    Love Paige
    xoxoxo

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