Upon a lover's ideal

This was a great poem and i am sorry i took so long. This poem is so beautiful!!!! i am glad you entered my contest with it!!!!

This is a beautiful poem..i liked it..

Really sweet. i loved all the analogies adn especially the line "sweet teardrops of the sunlight". man, that was soooo beautiful. i adored this poem. 100% brilliant : )

Beautiful job, I loved the second stanza.

"Alas" usually refers to something sad.

Why has this such a low rating? Very well written. Good use of rhyme, nicely portrayed, and the repetition use worked well too. I really don't have a bad comment to say about this. Thanks for sharing.