FOREVER MORE

by Kelly   Aug 2, 2006


Im sitting here broken,
At a loss, not knowing what to do.
On my tears i am choking,
All becuase of you.

I feel the sorrow overcome me,
As tears stain my face.
Cant believe the sorry state i am in,
What an absolute disgrace.

I should never have let you in,
You promised to care and protect.
Now my broken pieces are smaller than before,
you are something i will live to regret.

How can you just leave me?
Tell me we are through?
You lied to me constantly,
Yet i still love you.

You were supposed to be the one,
To save me from myself.
But look what you have done,
This self harm to myself.

I cut and i slice,
through no fault of my own.
Your are to blame,
Its your fault i have become undone.

You lied and you cheated.
Hurt me so deep.
Broke down my walls,
Then left me to weep.

You are not who i thought,
Your soul must be black.
The pain you have caused,
has brought my scars back.

Do you even realise
the damage you have done?
I opended up my soul, my heart,
For i believed we would never part.

Now i dwell in my own misery.
For i see no brighter days for me.
But what a fool i am,
I cant let you go.
I will always love you.......forever more

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    I don't think I commented on this poem but I like it alot, its so deep! Full of emotions you really know how to express the feeling. Great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "But what a fool i am,
    I cant let you go.
    I will always love you.......forever more"

    Isn't that the truth...
    It's a shame we can't control who we fall in and out of love with, but i guess thats the point.
    Wonderful poem as always hun
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Brilliant again hun, you capture your feelings with sure flair. can feel your pain- nothing quite like heartbreak is there?? lol. 5/5 as always xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    I can safely say that most of us have felt the feelings portrayed in this poem, and i can also safely say that you just write in such a way that describes emotions and feelings so well that you connect brilliantly with the reader. Yet again 5 out of 5.
    Ginnie x

  • 17 years ago

    by Ignis Divine

    I enjoyed your poem because I could find my own past experiences in it ... it has a lot of feeling... quite nice :)