Tell Me

Awww! So sad! Very, very powerful! Its strong words used. Its a great job! You write great! Keep it up! xx

Wow very strong words. I truly feel this way wow like right on the dot.

Great job. your a great poet. keep up the good work. :)

Great job. your a great poet. keep up the good work. :)

I might be the only one so far that doesn't find this poem sad. I couldn't feel the emotions the speaker was trying to put forth, nor could I sense any kind of pain beyond the words. The wording made sense but some places seemed off and rough at first such as your first couple of stanzas while the one:
Tell me that I'll never find,
Someone to be with till the end.
Tell me I'm not worth anything,
And that my heart will never mend.
Was written better than the first couple of lines. I thought it was a good attempt at a poem but not the type that would want me to rush out and say it was full of talent unfortunately. It was good though so keep praticng at sending emotion to your readers!