Losing it

by Chloe   Aug 3, 2006


I feel like giving up
since the day you left
I'm filled with guilt and hurt
so would you come back to me
take this pain away
i want it to be the end
I'm sick of crying
my heart it ripping
day by day
I'm starting to dissolve
I'm crashing to the ground
take this hurting shit
and leave me here
i want this to be over
take me away
the demands they choke me
all I'm doing is suffering
i want to live free
take these chains
take these burdens
let me go
so i can finally be me
I'm sick of dying more and more
take me please
I'm just about done
so what do i do with all this
i need someone to come save me
because its obvious now
that I'm pretty much losing it

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Honestly?
    This sounds like something from a poetry club.
    Y'know... like,
    Those people with drums
    And smooth voices.
    I can hear some person
    Talking slowly
    Explaining this poem.
    Wonderful write, my dear.
    It's... riveting.
    I effing LOVE your format.
    I tried that bunches of times,
    but I always that I've done something wrong.
    5/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by Regie*

    WE HAVE TH SAME NAME