Invisible
by .::Lovely*Letdown::. Aug 5, 2006
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Living my same old stone cold lie is starting to seep through more than just my shallow skin, freezing the unsteady beating of my once vulnerable heart. |
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16 years ago
by broken angel
Excellent write, I really enjoyed this poem because I can really relate, but then again, who can't? and that's what makes this poem SO great! Everyone feels invisible, more than others, but we all have that feeling some point in our life. I also like that you kinda (I think you were @ least) conveyed the idea don't judge by the outside skin, you don't know me. I've been judged my whole life so I can sorta relate. 5/5 for sure!!!
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17 years ago
by lexie
Just another smile to hide the tears.
Just another face in the world who doesn't belong.
these were my favorite lines.youre an amazing poet.that was such an emotional and moving poem.it really made me think and i can relate so much.keep it up!!
--lexie -
17 years ago
Great job on this. It was very well written and it sent a very strong message out. It was like a don't judge before you get to know somebody first message. But yeah, i really loved it...you're pretty good for only 14. Keep up the great work darling.
P.s. thanx for the comment on my poem, i really appreciated it.
-Jenna.xo -
17 years ago
Dear..you're invisible to NO ONE! you may think that, but whoops, not true. People see in you, not because they see right through you, not because your invisible, but because they look deep into you. They aren't looking past you, they are looking in you. Love you forever and a day
xo
