A Visit From Heaven

by AllHailTheHeartbreaker   Aug 10, 2006


You seemed so very real
it must have been a dream
A peculiar specter's event
if you know what I mean...

Coming in through my window
although it was shut tight
You promise to lay with me
and stay with me all night.

Your voice was no more than a whisper
but the words came through quite clear
I cried into the safe darkness
longing to hold you near.

You said you gave up forever for this
and I asked you what you meant
Surely God will forgive his sweetest angel
it must be true that you're heaven-sent.

When the morning came
it ripped us apart
You said you had to go
and I promised to keep you in my heart.

I never thought I'd wake up
no matter how unreal it seemed
Maybe you never came back
it must have been a dream...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww!! this was a really good so far the best of what I've read from you nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwwww.. that was so sweet! i loved it hun! the flow was good, the descriptions and emotion were beautiful, and it made me smile.. great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is a sad poem, it really sounds bittersweet. I particulary liked the lines 'I cried into the safe darkness
    longing to hold you near.' Because they are quite universal - who hasn't kept their tears for midnight when no one else can see? I also liked the general tone in this and how personal it is. I'd suggest working on the rhythm a bit so that it flows more and the rhymes 'fit.' Apart from that minor suggestion this was an interesting read. Well done :)

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