War and Tears

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Aug 10, 2006


Is there good in war
with all it's tears and pain?
It's full of blood and gore
and death out in the rain.

Hear the cries of terror
as bombs continue to fall.
Making one fatal error
will ensure the death of all.

Flames rip through towns
to destroy people's lives.
Cover your ears against the sounds
of men losing their wives.

Little children die
before their lives begun.
Weeping mothers cry
for the loss of a daughter or a son.

Men permitted to kill
under the facade of good.
Killing with great skill
many more than they should.

***I'm just so sick of everyone going to war...I dunno.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    OMG!!!! goood goood goood i lked it very much 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    War at iraq kill my cusin

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow! I've never heard someone have the guts to describe war like that...it's exactly the way I feel about it. How ppl are allowed to take someone elses life in the name of good. That's like saying you killed your brother because you thought it was best...you'd go to jail for that so why not killing ppl in mass!......GREAT JOB! 5/5!!!
    ~Jules

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

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