Running to Darkness

by The Lonely Rose   Aug 16, 2006


Let me run away from this place i call home.....
why do i have so much confusion in my mind, heart and soul..
where is there to turn but darkness..
was it real...
was it fake..
all that drama...
everything that happened..
why am i confused...
was my life a lie.....
drowned in lies till i died....
wanting to cut...
clutching the knife in my hands my make me feel better...
release the pain..
but drops it..
I've been holding on to these to emotions to long....
what is there to do in this life...
why do i have so much confusion..
so I'm running to darkness...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, this was an alright poem. There was only a little sense of darkness. Not a lot, but it wasa good poem. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Okay, I did not feel that this was that great.. The flow was off, the descriptions were nothing special, and you had spelling mistakes.. Try and go over it and fix it up a little.. 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sчиτнєτι¢__x.

    This was a really dark intense poem. Loved how you asked so many questions, kept the reader thinking. I also loved the ending, I thought it was really well done. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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