Wow... What else can I say WOW!!!!
Babe, this poem is amazing. Makes some of my poems looking horrible but yea... I like it.
5/5
Tess

Wow this is an excelent poem wish i could rite this good

This poem was was omg i dont have words for it

I like this out of all the poems you wrote, its like a 100/5 lol
and yeah, damn dude....i love it

That was..whow. awsome. are you hiding something from me? lol
~sarah~

Aw this was wonderful [[=
Carissa

This is a really awesome poem it's just too awesome

I totally love this poem its really touching and so amazing

Whoa!!..tk a step back ehre..the emotion was gr8 and i loved the flow..it was wonderful:D
u can definitly write
keep up the gr8 work
bree x

Wow...that one was fantastic also =D I haven't read poems anywhere close to yours before for a long time =) I love the clear worlds you create and the way the words draw the reader right into it's world =) 5/5
Rhea

Wow...that one was fantastic also =D I haven't read poems anywhere close to yours before for a long time =) I love the clear worlds you create and the way the words draw the reader right into it's world =) 5/5
Rhea

I love the ending...very moving and inspirational, and once I finished reading it, I was left with a smile on my face.
Beautiful imagery, created very vivid pictures, flawless flow, and powerful and intense with an equally stunning ending...perfect.

Amazing, great use of words, great meaning, all out GREAT, im gonna go read more of your poems!!!

Last 2 lines....beautiful. :) You need to correct this part: when its all seems in vain?
You have its and it should be when IT all seems in vain?
I give you a five. Check out my latest poem for me an tell me what you think. It's titled: The Thoughts of the Mindless.

Wow yeah just everything about that poem was soo good....thats all needed said..

Woahh!!! *claps*
very good
5/5

Keep it up

Renee
x

Wooooooooooooooooooow am speachlessreally urway of writing is so pretty and sensetive its so close to hearts yes the meaning of life is to live it bravo

Thank you one and all for your beautiful comments. I am moved, deeply.

This is well written and i saw it telling a story of a fallen angel. Brilliant piece indeed