by -The-Undying- Aug 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Laying speechless, my withered body has nothing left to suggest. |
by Aline
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Ok i liked this one more, very shadowy and mysterious and that's why i liked it i was abt to put 5/5 but there ws something missin, help me find it.mmmmm maybe u should make the lines better performed.. |
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AMAZING!!! |
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There are not others problems to fix here, simply just our own. |
by Synh
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Omg, I loved this poem completely. The vocabulary, emotion, and power beind it is positively mind blowing. Excellent job. 5/5 |