Breaking His Heart

by Lauren   Aug 20, 2006


It's the same old story, with a sad little twist.
It starts off happy, but ends with a slit to the wrists.
As you hear the words I have to say,
remember that this guy cries everyday.

I'll tell it like this,
it began with a moment of pure bliss.
Two people, madly in love.
I was his angel who fell from above.
He gave me his heart, and I swore to keep it safe.
But things happened, due to a change in faith.

Now we both sit here, broken hearted.
And it's all because of the separate ways we parted.
If I saw him today, I'd tell him all the things I need to say.
I'd tell him I still love him, and I still think of him to this day.

*Long story short, I broke the most amazing guy's heart, and haven't said another word since. I still love him, but that means nothing now...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was another heartrending piece. I especially loved the message on the whole, 'twas absolutely lovely and bittersweet. It held so much emotions which are absolutely poignant, I dare say. Lovely poem. I hope you all the best and take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    LAME!!!! sorry but that guys a prick...everyone deserves second chances...i gave my girl another chance...technically even three so wtheck is this guy doing...jeez. K sorry for the emotional outburst :P

    i love the poem tho and once again he sux...but i think you might be surprised how fast he could change into a hypocrite...love the poem great emotion nice storyline k anyways i love it lol THE END!

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Rhyming was great and it had a nice flow. I'm so sorry this happened.