Alive on the Dance Floor

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Aug 21, 2006


Stepping out of the crowd,
Her hips sway to the rythmn of the music.
Head bobbing to the beat,
Her body begins to sing on the dance floor.

Others part, watching her in her element.
Dancing.
Sweat begins to frame her face,
As she continues to pour her heart out.

Her energy electrifies the club,
Her passion, obvious to everyone watching,
Still continues to drive her.

Her hips sway to the rythmn of the music,
Grinding with the nearest partner.
Alive on the dance floor, she shines.

*inspired by Step Up loll (for those who've seen it ;) )
**not my best, yes, i no, but hey.. it's been a while lol

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey man :) nice! i think my only thing was that try to have the same amount of lines in each stanza... but then again... poetic freedom man so.... just suggestion :P but good work :) keep it up!

    Ruthie xoxo