A Different Kind of Hero

by Corey   Aug 22, 2006


He wanders through the land
Of places past and gone
The memories of old
An artist already drawn

A man who stands alone
No companions here to trust
A broken sword across his hip
Its edges blood and rust

Shunned from all the world
A disease contained inside
His reflection on the water
Disfigured by the tide

Across the vast deep sea
To islands far away
He'll redeem himself
And fight for freedom's day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    not your best
    but it was still alright
    nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Not your best, but it isn't THAT bad. Mind me, I become harsh at times. The flow was horrible, in my opinion, as was the hold it is SUPPOSED to have on the reader. I forced myself to read on. Better luck next time. 3.8/5

    No worries, I don't actually vote on the voting thing, I just say what I would vote.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. even the title got my attention!!!!! that was one awesome poem. the words made it even nicer. keep up the work.

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