Creating Memories

by Midnight Sun   Aug 22, 2006


I stood by the sea
Felt the mist-filled breeze on my face
The tide washed over my bare feet
As my soul your arms embraced.

The sand remembered each of our steps
As we walked hand-in-hand;
The moon setting softly on our skin
As the night captured our hearts in a blend.

And as I look into your icy eyes
They melt with the tears you cry
And they silently promise,
"I'll never leave your side."

My fingers are tangled in yours
and my mind enveloped by your care...
If the whole world crumbled down
God, himself, would us spare.

So let us never this moment forget
Never let it escape our minds
Rather as we leave here tonight
We shall anticipate the next time...
we create another memory.

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Woah:P Yeah, they are really alike:P
    How funny:) Excellent poem;) I'd vote, but my computer is, well, lets call it strange:)

    The Angel of Secrets

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    This poem is soo beautiful!!!
    i love the imagery (and usually i dont go for that stuff)
    5/5
    Thank you so much for your comment!
    ..xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Colossus

    Hey jules,
    first of i would like to thank you alot for all your comments about my work, they make me feel good on the inside. second i love all your poems but this one is my favourite, good work!

    superman

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great use of vivid and descriptive words, and your expressions were good like, "the sand remembered each of our steps" and how God would spare you two, really good emphasis of a deep love.

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