If you knew

by brianna   Aug 23, 2006


I ran in to you
the other day
my feelings of disgust
wont go away

you tore my life
my will to think to care
i'm changing my life
so you will stop to stare

die in a hole
covered in dust
knowing not of love
but only of lust

i dig the knife in
to ease all my pain
the blood trickles down
i've hit a main vein

as i look to the light
i break out in cries
because you killed me
with your lies

now i wont have kids
a future or dream
my parents wont know
when they see me and scream

i want you to know
it is your fault now
if only you loved me
if only you knew how

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh my gosh...brianna....this made me cry...wow dont you ever feel like that guys are jerks!! Wow this is so sad and over whelming I loved it just wow!! your amazing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow this is awesome good job u showed some real emotion in this and i think u did a very good job :D

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by mimzy

    Omg..
    wow.. just wow..
    I love the line "I dig the knife in, to ease my pain, the blood trickles down, i've hit a main vein"
    beautiful.. keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Wow! very good poem yet sad but i loved it! lots of emotions there...it flowed very well and the rhyming was very good..i think you should use different words which mean the same thing ( if that makes sense!) but very well written poem...well done on a GREAT job! 5/5
    Keep writing
    And
    Keep Smiling

    Much LOve
    *-A.Pathetic.Mistake
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow a very great poem, you have showed a great emotions.
    keep up the great job 5/5

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