The game of life

by cutytothebuty   Aug 25, 2006


The game of life

I am growing up really fast
And I realize that life is a must
As I have seen things before, I don't see the same
When I realize, life is just a game
Whether you win or not, you still have to play
You cant quit or go away
I watch the other players, and I study the game
I learn that if I lose, I am the one to blame
No one else is there
In life, no body really care
You have to take responsibility for your action
When you choose to go in the wrong way, don't point in anyones direction

I am starting to understand that I am not better then anyone
I am still a child, not a human, still not done
A not finished piece thats trying to collect its parts
When its life just starts
I am trying to figure out who is the real me
Which part of the game should I be?
I am all alone, trying to find my way to the fame
When I realize, life is just a game
Some win, some lose, but everyone is a human, everyone is the same
There are some humans who are rich and lame
Some adults are still kids
That has no idea where their life leads

I have grown up to understand a lot more
I know much more then I did before
Still, I have the whole game to figure out
The rules are not written, and thats what life is all about

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melanie

    I don't know why someone didn't give you a 5/5 because this is one of the best poems I've read in my life. Mine don't even come close to this. I really like that your poems rhyme I kindof don't have any interest in the ones that don't. Good poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    For a poem with a few typos, it was very good quality. I related to it because just recently I have been thinking a lot about life, how it has no rules, or that it has too many laws... oh well, it gave words to my empty thoughts.
    By the way, welcome to p & q :-)

    //T.L.//

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    Heya lina, I liked this a lot. It was an original and interesting style it needs a little proof reading for spelling and punctuation but all in all a very good poem. 4.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Love it love it love it
    ~sarah~

  • 17 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    Good poem. I really liked this part:

    "I am all alone, trying to find my way to the fame
    When I realize, life is just a game
    Some win, some lose, but everyone is a human, everyone is the same "

    You've got the idea. The rhyme scheme is pretty good. I liked it. I can relate. I've had similar feelings in the past. Good job. Keep it up.

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